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DrWho Platinum Member
Joined: 26 May 2003 Posts: 1930 Location: CT - USA
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:03 am Post subject: |
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You know - I am always eager to post comments after the first few listens. But there is also value in waiting a day or two then re-listen.
So I was thinking about the end part as the issue of how much to play has confronted me more than once. I think what really matters is how memorable the section is. Or in my own vernacular - how tasty is it? So there aren't a lot of notes, but the licks are tasty - and that is key because that is what the listener will remember.
Well that is my view - your mileage may vary - and all disclaimers apply. _________________ Care for a jelly baby?
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unimon Senior Member
Joined: 08 Aug 2003 Posts: 416 Location: Saipan, CNMI
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:03 am Post subject: Your February song |
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Hello Sewa,
A BEAUTIFUL SONG! Wonderful sound palette, theme and mix.
I look forward to your next work; I'm glad you decided to join us for this
round of osam.
Tom |
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sewa Platinum Member
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 1293
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:36 am Post subject: |
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Thanks everyone, I really appreciate your comments. Art - I'm looking forward to your tunes as they're right up my street |
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ellll Platinum Member
Joined: 09 Dec 2004 Posts: 3118 Location: Panama City, FL
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Again!!
Just listening a bit more to everyones'...This gets more laid back with listening...Love the whole thing!!
One thing..at about 1:30 and beyond as I recall...you have the bass eletronic sound move UP from the C to C#..and it might be more interesting to move a contrasting note in the treble...down...
Not anything wrong...just something that kept striking me...
Great Number...and the style I can't even get off the ground...so.. I am little help!!
My Regards...John ellll
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Stephen Platinum Member
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JonSolo Platinum Member
Joined: 14 Aug 2005 Posts: 969 Location: Charleston
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:10 pm Post subject: |
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Just wanted to add a comment to this.
Initially I had stated that the extra kick at 2:40 seemed a bit much. After giving this a few more listens, I have to admit that it not only grew on me, but created a break in the experience that accented the song.
I now understand why you added it.
Here is where we all benefit from each others (sometimes quite different) grasp of musical knowledge and how to exercise it.
Once again, great job.
Jon _________________ Jon Solo
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