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rabbit · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:00 am Post subject: ethurnal

here is a new string pice,called
:Ethurnal darkness

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=378408&content=songinfo&songID=6674794
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adicicco · Joined: 30 Aug 2005 Posts: 15 Location: Southern California

Lovely song! It definitely conjures up film-like images.

I really enjoyed it when you expanded the melody line by bringing in the lower voices, adding more texture and harmony.

Best of luck,
Al Di Cicco

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Pumpkin King · Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:44 pm Post subject:

I liked it.

Though I would suggest to maybe add another instrument. Maybe a piano, or a solo violin or cello. Maybe even a rhythm from a snare late in the song. Doing so would add a bit more emotion (if it were intended).

Other than that, good job. Smile

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