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xbubbax
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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:13 pm Post subject: 1st song on the emx ~the 1st wave |
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hope you enjoy,
i effed up a lil bit on the transition, bit it comes together.
plz let me know for critique
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6HPH4HF6XM |
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xbubbax
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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im impatient
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zalo
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:27 pm Post subject: |
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patience
not everyone is checking this site every couple hours
i feel like the song would come together more if you had some kind of lead synth line
or even a bass line
something to create more of a structure
also i would recommend practicing the song several times before recording it
it seemed like you were unsure of what came next |
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xbubbax
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:42 am Post subject: |
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yea i know what u mean on the bassline thing.
it was just a 1st run at things. also the recording thing is just for fun....its more of a recorded progression....but just wanted some feedback....thanks zalo |
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musikmachine
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I'll check it out later. I just uploaded a track as werll so check it out and let me know what ya think.
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xbubbax
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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cool not a prob  |
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X-Trade
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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The bit where you dropped the filter over the whole track on the KP seemed a bit... bland...
I mean its a cool effect but much better if you for example swept the filter up slowly or something.
watched the video yesterday but I believe this was somewhere in the second minute?
Other than that... yeah its quite cool.... just very disjointed and repettitive and undeveloped...
Not dissing, I can see the potential and only time will allow you to develop your own personal style |
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travisthered
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It seems like you could have a cool track if you worked it out some more... From 1:30->2:00 I was expecting something to go off in the low end and i wasn't really satisfied with that off beat kick solo...
| X-Trade wrote: | The bit where you dropped the filter over the whole track on the KP seemed a bit... bland...
I mean its a cool effect but much better if you for example swept the filter up slowly or something. |
I agree, It was from 2:37-2:48, WAY to long and again there was no climax at the end. |
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musikmachine
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Not bad for a first run. Good intro there, could be leading into a dnb track. 
I agree with what's already been said, think about your timing and use of fx to make a track more interesting and not incidental.
If you tighten up on the timing and add ze bass you could have nice techno track here. Good effort for a first run.
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Milhouse
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:39 am Post subject: |
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Reminded me of 1991.
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travisthered
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| Milhouse wrote: | | Reminded me of 1991. |
lolz?
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musikmachine
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| travisthered wrote: | | Milhouse wrote: | | Reminded me of 1991. |
lolz?
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Can't touch this! 
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xbubbax
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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| thats funny.... |
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Milhouse
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| musikmachine wrote: | | travisthered wrote: | | Milhouse wrote: | | Reminded me of 1991. |
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Can't touch this! |
Close, but that was 1990!! I remember dancin to that in my zubas!!
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| Milhouse wrote: |
Close, but that was 1990!! I remember dancin to that in my zubas!! |
The magazine says 1991... |
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