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karpoos



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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 4:35 pm    Post subject: March Reply with quote

Its actually a birthday march, not the name of the appropriate month.

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PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think this could use a much more upbeat drum pattern, and maybe using a different kit. The electronic drums don't fit IMO. Also, some of the sounds get pretty cluttered at times. Instead of keeping all the instruments in the center, try to pan some more to the left or right, and balance everything out. I had this problem when starting out, but I learned how to pan things correctly and it helped a lot.
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PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 8:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good in many ways I agree With PK on the pan and to some extent on the kit used...

The material is too thick and it covers some of the areas of interest, as noted already..., Thin it out in instrumentation and volumes/velocity...and it will serve better... Smile

I found the overall sound of real interest and possibility Just needs cleaning up here and there and a better overall theme I believe would help

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PostPosted: Fri May 06, 2011 10:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had listened to this a bit ago and wasn't able to put a finger on what it needed, I do agree with the above comments, some tightening up may be enough even.
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