I Know, A Dark Original

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Boninsongs
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I Know, A Dark Original

Post by Boninsongs »

Hey guys I wrote a different style song this time. I went for something a little darker. I hope you like it!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=R8ArSG3N0Tw
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ClaytonE
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Post by ClaytonE »

Hello David...I listened to both the songs you posted here and you have potential Amigo!!!
I am also a member of the Acoustic Guitar Forum, and perhaps you might also post your songs in the "Show and Tell" section of that forum...Great knowlege base and wonderfully friendly people too boot!!!
On my I-Pad, (mono speaker only), the vocals & guitar needed a little reverb to "deepen" the sound, however that is only a technicality...
All in all an enjoyable enterprise and Kudos on your tunes... :3dcool:
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Bald Eagle
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Post by Bald Eagle »

Very nice song. I'm imagining it electrified which is more my preference.
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