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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:33 pm
by sewa
Congratulations Diego and Lorenzo. The vocals are great, I would never have thought that only one person was behind it.
I like the intro but agree that the ending does not really fit. This isn't a big issue though, considering the overal quality of your work. Both of you showed some serious musical skills.
sewa
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:16 pm
by Diego
Thanks a lot Sewa!
I really appreciate your comment.
What do you mean by "the ending does not really fit"?
The ending of the choral part or the electronic ending of the piece?
Thanks again,
regards!
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:01 pm
by sewa
The electronic one; the choral part was great throughout.
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 8:29 am
by Diego
Well, there's a lot behind the electronic part...
I give it a particular meaning, because when i wrote it I was feeling like prays were going in vain, in a confused world where just some privileged voices (the ending voices) were listened...
BTW thanks a lot for letting me know it doesn't fit, maybe I choose the wrong way to expose my feelings: it's very important for me to know other listeners don't feel like the author, because when I write a song I think it's important to share my emotions and make the listener live the same situation I was living while writing the tune.
Regards
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:29 pm
by sewa
Don't take my comments too hard though. Its your music and its about you in the first place.
s.
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:42 pm
by Diego
Oh, no, Sewa, I'm so thankfull for every comment I receive.
I think my music is usefull for me to express my feelings, but for the listener to live my feelings in the same way.
So I don't demand every one feels like me, but I would love to know what other musicians think, so I like to read all your comments, and take them as they are.
Regards
Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 4:12 pm
by jazlover
I love the chorus because no instrument in the world can compete with voices IMHO. I find the ending very cool. I enjoy the (jazz chords) leading us up to the chorus. My ears like that final "Amen" harmony in this context. Everything is very exciting and they are tied together nicely.
I have to be careful with what I am about to say because there are so many great musicians here. You and Lorenzo are excellent musicians with tremendous technical know how. One of the reasons I had to join this group was my awesome respect for all these guys. Otherwise I wouldn't have made my schedule even more pressured by committing. You talk about your respect toward your good teacher. You guys merit much respect as well.
Please keep the original stuff coming! I hope you two can collaborate more. Thanks for the work!