Text for song

Wings · Post by **Wings** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:01 am

Tnx Soda...well, this is in no way a good text from me, it is just a suggestion to you, 'cause only you can listen to the tune inside your head, and now the work is in your hands to try to match up a "functional" text to your tune and form.

My native language/tounge is norwegian, but being that I have spent close to 5 years in the US, I've picked up a few words here and there.

SODA · Post by **SODA** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:15 am

Oh!
Thnx, bro !!!!
AlThBst !!!

Wings · Post by **Wings** » Mon Oct 25, 2010 12:05 am

Just wondering Soda...did you ever finish that song, and if so...may I/we listen to it?

SODA · Post by **SODA** » Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:14 am

Hi, Wings!

Nice to see you again!

Thanx for helping me to wright the lyrics!

Yes, you can hear all my songs that ready at the moment!

Song "Runner is a ray"

http://www.myspace.com/sodamoscow

I'll be glad to here your opinion about it!

Best Regards!...

Wings · Post by **Wings** » Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:38 am

Nice and catchy summer-tune Soda.
Great job...!

If I can make any comments, I would maybe try a "lesser" mix in the beginning, 'cause you seem to give away the "whole melody and beats" right from the start, maybe you could try something less at first, then let it evolve towards a climax right before the last repetition of the refrain?

Otherwise music, voices and vo-coder is really nice, maybe sometimes difficult to hear and understand the words you're singing because of the vo-coder maybe set a bit to high.

All in all a good job Soda...I'm positively surprized.

Listening to the rest now...