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Lyrics? Help!

Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:47 pm
by stalian87
Hi everyone,

I've created this song which i call "angel in disguise" and Im in need of someone who can write the lyrics to this song.
The reason why i called it "Angel in disguise" is because last christmas i went to a store to buy a home telephone and behold the most beautiful girl i've ever seen! Sad I know but very true!
We got talking but i bottled it and I left like an absolute lemon! Lol

Anyway today i went back to the same store to pick something up, forgetting that this girls worked there and I see her again and it reminded me about this song i wrote about her just after i first saw her.

This song is really important to me and i would be really really greatful if someone could help me.

Let me know your thoughts of the song itself also. i suppose you can call it a pop song with a taste of latin.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ootnnwofd4j

Cheers,
Sal

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:19 am
by JonSolo
Nice music bed. How does the melody go?

Or do you just have a music bed with no melody?

Either way, I would consider collaborating with you.

Jon Solo

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:24 am
by stalian87
Hi Jon Solo,

To be honest, I did have a melody and also lyrics but My hard drive died on me around 7 months ago and i lost everything! :(

So I though it would be a good idea to get some else to come up with lyrics and a melody.

It'll be good to see what you can come up with, but please bear in mind the meaning of the song when your writing the lyrics.

Cheers,
Sal

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:47 am
by georgeinar
trust me on this one, if jonsolo writes the lyrics he will keep in mind the meaning, now if i had at it, it wouldn't be pretty, but you wouldn't be bored either, that i could promise you, good luck guys, sounds intriguing

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:44 pm
by Pecca
good idea to get some else to come up with lyrics and a melody

Ummm... You want someone to write you a complete song for a feeling/meeting you had ?

How genuine would that feel ? ;)
*teasing*

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:56 am
by JonSolo
I am working on it now.

Jon

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:55 am
by georgeinar
You better hurry up, because my song is almost done and I don't want to show you up. Of course I have an advantage, being I work only on one musical project at a time. :wink:

Re: Lyrics? Help!

Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:10 pm
by Sam CA
stalian87 wrote:Hi everyone,

I've created this song which i call "angel in disguise" and Im in need of someone who can write the lyrics to this song.
The reason why i called it "Angel in disguise" is because last christmas i went to a store to buy a home telephone and behold the most beautiful girl i've ever seen! Sad I know but very true!
We got talking but i bottled it and I left like an absolute lemon! Lol

Anyway today i went back to the same store to pick something up, forgetting that this girls worked there and I see her again and it reminded me about this song i wrote about her just after i first saw her.

This song is really important to me and i would be really really greatful if someone could help me.

Let me know your thoughts of the song itself also. i suppose you can call it a pop song with a taste of latin.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ootnnwofd4j

Cheers,
Sal
I'm going to have some fun with this

Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:50 am
by maelstrom191
good luck guys, can't wait to hear it.
if you need anyone to do vocals or just need help with a few lines, I'd be glad to help, I actually have a fairly extensive vocabulary, always helps to convey certain ideas that just need closure.
:D

Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:52 am
by Sam CA
Just played around with it for few minutes. You had done a great job with the recording part. It was mixed very well. I just improvised little bit, ..added some piano, organ, ..nothing special. I couldn't do justice to it in 10 minutes, so Pardon me all composers out there! i really liked your track man. I had so many ideas, but no time to actually work on it.

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=6b6e ... b9a8902bda

I'm not sure if i did this link/upload right.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:32 pm
by Giner
So . . . here we are, nine months on. Is there a great song out there now?

stalian87, did you regain your "bottle" and get a date with this lady?
Enquiring minds want to know.:D