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Pumpkin King Senior Member
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Tage Junior Member
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 9:54 am Post subject: |
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Brilliant.
Can i suggest though. I thought it could maybe do with a little more. It seemed empty in places. Something like a melody to accent the offbeats?
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Pumpkin King Senior Member
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 11:27 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, I know what you're talking about. Like around 1:14, there should be a melody to go along with the beat. Maybe in some other places too. I was sort of stuck; trying to figure out what to add to it it without losing the main rhythm.
It's something I can work on though. I'll see what I can do.
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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No worries.
I love this kinda stuff.
Hear's mine. It was a rush ( i did it in one night) job, but i feel it has an action sci fi movie feel to it.
http://www.myspace.com/cbmiddleton
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