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Mike-K
Joined: 10 Feb 2008 Posts: 49 Location: Atlanta, GA
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:55 pm Post subject: Opinions Welcome |
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I'm interested in your opinions about mix and structure in this new tune
I just finished last night.
Any critique welcome!
Dancing With You
Thanks,
Mike
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Pecca Platinum Member
Joined: 09 Jan 2002 Posts: 867 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:32 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds nice in the sonic mix but i would cut the lead sequence parts.
My personal taste tells me to divide the them a little more.
The harmonica should perheps have shorter seqences and perhaps a little more structure to it. Make it less of an improvisation is my suggestion.
You might emphasize the bass and drums for a few bars and let the harmonica / flute rest... Then build it up again with a flute sequence (or harmonica)
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JonSolo Platinum Member
Joined: 14 Aug 2005 Posts: 969 Location: Charleston
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:43 am Post subject: |
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Yea I agree with Pecca. I think he is saying that there needs to be a distinctive lead melody...something we can grab and hold onto the entire song.
But it is a nice soft jazzy track. Very relaxing.
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Mike-K
Joined: 10 Feb 2008 Posts: 49 Location: Atlanta, GA
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:17 am Post subject: |
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Thanks a bunch, guys! That's great feedback!
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