ethurnal

rabbit · Post by **rabbit** » Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:00 am

here is a new string pice,called
:Ethurnal darkness

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... ID=6674794

adicicco · Post by **adicicco** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 10:26 pm

Lovely song! It definitely conjures up film-like images.

I really enjoyed it when you expanded the melody line by bringing in the lower voices, adding more texture and harmony.

Best of luck,
Al Di Cicco

www.soundclick.com/aldicicco

Pumpkin King · Post by **Pumpkin King** » Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:44 pm

I liked it.

Though I would suggest to maybe add another instrument. Maybe a piano, or a solo violin or cello. Maybe even a rhythm from a snare late in the song. Doing so would add a bit more emotion (if it were intended).

Other than that, good job.