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At Day's End
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 3:56 pm
by phattbuzz
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Second song ready for RPM Challenge (8 more to go)!
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:03 pm
by rmvieira
Great song! Nice lyrics and music. My only comment is that some of the vocals are too rushed together as you try to include every word in the same breath. You could either drop a couple of words (without losing context) or slightly extend the timing of each phrase at the beginning and end ... don't worry as that is used very commonly but it does mean adjusting your vocal timing cues. Keep em coming!
