Dee - Sept 2008 - Solace
Moderators: Sharp, X-Trade, Pepperpotty, karmathanever, georgeinar
Hi Dee,
Sorry for being late......
This is very lovely...and I find it strikes a resonant chord in me as a touch of seasonal sound...
The intro might have a better transition or"flow" a bit more, into the arpeggiated section near the beginning; its seems just a tad rough to me......but it's not a big deal..
Harmonically, it is VERY interesting and well done. The issue of home key is actually missing for a good space...; And probably everyone knows how much I like that!
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For my confused understanding of sound...."I"..., would like a bit more fullness in the FX here...; more spaciousness if you will, (but I realize it would lose some of the more "pointed" accuracy in note and harmony...)
Thanks!!!!!!!!...It's very nice and also smooth and a bit lonely.....Just right eor a winter of emotion.....Good Job!
Johnny...(ellll)
Sorry for being late......
This is very lovely...and I find it strikes a resonant chord in me as a touch of seasonal sound...
The intro might have a better transition or"flow" a bit more, into the arpeggiated section near the beginning; its seems just a tad rough to me......but it's not a big deal..
Harmonically, it is VERY interesting and well done. The issue of home key is actually missing for a good space...; And probably everyone knows how much I like that!
.For my confused understanding of sound...."I"..., would like a bit more fullness in the FX here...; more spaciousness if you will, (but I realize it would lose some of the more "pointed" accuracy in note and harmony...)
Thanks!!!!!!!!...It's very nice and also smooth and a bit lonely.....Just right eor a winter of emotion.....Good Job!
Johnny...(ellll)