I have a new synth song to review, it is the song ("Now You're Here") on the top of this link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=224436
Please tell me how you like this song and how it can be improved. If you review me, I will review you, I promise!
A new weird TR-Rack song to review!
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Hi aaron,
Had a listen to your track.
The music is really good, good structure and choice of sounds fit well together. Drums could come up a bit in the mix and could do with sounding a bit tighter, maybe a bit more compression?
The vocal, for me, is too loud and I think you use too much chorus on your voice. I feel your not confident enough with your singing. Also you need to sing clearly so every word is heard. Please don't take my comments the wrong way as I have listened to a few of your tracks and I'm very impressed with your songwriting!
Had a listen to your track.
The music is really good, good structure and choice of sounds fit well together. Drums could come up a bit in the mix and could do with sounding a bit tighter, maybe a bit more compression?
The vocal, for me, is too loud and I think you use too much chorus on your voice. I feel your not confident enough with your singing. Also you need to sing clearly so every word is heard. Please don't take my comments the wrong way as I have listened to a few of your tracks and I'm very impressed with your songwriting!
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aaron aardvark
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