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stalian87 Full Member
Joined: 25 Sep 2007 Posts: 219
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:47 pm Post subject: Lyrics? Help! |
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Hi everyone,
I've created this song which i call "angel in disguise" and Im in need of someone who can write the lyrics to this song.
The reason why i called it "Angel in disguise" is because last christmas i went to a store to buy a home telephone and behold the most beautiful girl i've ever seen! Sad I know but very true!
We got talking but i bottled it and I left like an absolute lemon! Lol
Anyway today i went back to the same store to pick something up, forgetting that this girls worked there and I see her again and it reminded me about this song i wrote about her just after i first saw her.
This song is really important to me and i would be really really greatful if someone could help me.
Let me know your thoughts of the song itself also. i suppose you can call it a pop song with a taste of latin.
http://www.mediafire.com/?ootnnwofd4j
Cheers,
Sal |
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JonSolo Platinum Member
Joined: 14 Aug 2005 Posts: 969 Location: Charleston
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:19 am Post subject: |
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Nice music bed. How does the melody go?
Or do you just have a music bed with no melody?
Either way, I would consider collaborating with you.
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stalian87 Full Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:24 am Post subject: |
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Hi Jon Solo,
To be honest, I did have a melody and also lyrics but My hard drive died on me around 7 months ago and i lost everything!
So I though it would be a good idea to get some else to come up with lyrics and a melody.
It'll be good to see what you can come up with, but please bear in mind the meaning of the song when your writing the lyrics.
Cheers,
Sal |
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georgeinar Platinum Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:47 am Post subject: |
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trust me on this one, if jonsolo writes the lyrics he will keep in mind the meaning, now if i had at it, it wouldn't be pretty, but you wouldn't be bored either, that i could promise you, good luck guys, sounds intriguing _________________ George Nelson is 2loose
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Pecca Platinum Member
Joined: 09 Jan 2002 Posts: 867 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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good idea to get some else to come up with lyrics and a melody
Ummm... You want someone to write you a complete song for a feeling/meeting you had ?
How genuine would that feel ?
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JonSolo Platinum Member
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georgeinar Platinum Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:55 am Post subject: |
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You better hurry up, because my song is almost done and I don't want to show you up. Of course I have an advantage, being I work only on one musical project at a time. _________________ George Nelson is 2loose
http://www.cdbaby.com/artist/2loose for my cds
http://www.soundclick.com/2loose or follow my tweets = 2loose_buzzgoth (twitter name)
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Sam CA Platinum Member
Joined: 02 May 2008 Posts: 3990 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:10 pm Post subject: Re: Lyrics? Help! |
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stalian87 wrote: | Hi everyone,
I've created this song which i call "angel in disguise" and Im in need of someone who can write the lyrics to this song.
The reason why i called it "Angel in disguise" is because last christmas i went to a store to buy a home telephone and behold the most beautiful girl i've ever seen! Sad I know but very true!
We got talking but i bottled it and I left like an absolute lemon! Lol
Anyway today i went back to the same store to pick something up, forgetting that this girls worked there and I see her again and it reminded me about this song i wrote about her just after i first saw her.
This song is really important to me and i would be really really greatful if someone could help me.
Let me know your thoughts of the song itself also. i suppose you can call it a pop song with a taste of latin.
http://www.mediafire.com/?ootnnwofd4j
Cheers,
Sal |
I'm going to have some fun with this _________________ Sam
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maelstrom191
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:50 am Post subject: |
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good luck guys, can't wait to hear it.
if you need anyone to do vocals or just need help with a few lines, I'd be glad to help, I actually have a fairly extensive vocabulary, always helps to convey certain ideas that just need closure.
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Sam CA Platinum Member
Joined: 02 May 2008 Posts: 3990 Location: Los Angeles
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:52 am Post subject: |
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Just played around with it for few minutes. You had done a great job with the recording part. It was mixed very well. I just improvised little bit, ..added some piano, organ, ..nothing special. I couldn't do justice to it in 10 minutes, so Pardon me all composers out there! i really liked your track man. I had so many ideas, but no time to actually work on it.
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=6b6e7902b7313945d2db6fb9a8902bda
I'm not sure if i did this link/upload right. _________________ Sam
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Giner Platinum Member
Joined: 02 May 2003 Posts: 1347 Location: Alberta
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:32 pm Post subject: |
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So . . . here we are, nine months on. Is there a great song out there now?
stalian87, did you regain your "bottle" and get a date with this lady?
Enquiring minds want to know. |
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